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Hopelessly dependent
On one anothers intent
If theres one thing I know that I must do
Then it would be to believe in you

Give in too your temptation
But dont give in to your fear
You'll only find gratification
When you find me here

If I could have any one thing I know
Then I'd wish that time would move slow
So I could savor it here with you
As the light makes its way through

I regret nothing I did
When I see that look on your face
Theres nothing more we could have wanted
Then to share together this small space

I've only begun to learn
How it feels to be the one who burns
And this is all I have to say
I wouldnt have it any other way

But suddenly the pieces fall together
And your twist on words start to make sense
I thought this feeling would last forever
But now I cant help becoming tense
©2004-2009 ~evilgrayman
:iconevilgrayman:

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its very wargable.

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:iconkirject:
*applaude* Bravo bravo!

I could never write poetry like that. o_x;
:iconevilgrayman:
lol, its nothing special, anyone can write like I do, I'm sure if you tried it wouldnt be a problem.

--
Our greatest glory consist not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall.

I'm an addict for dramatics, I confuse the two for love.
:iconmarie666:
wow that is really good*two thumbs up*
:iconevilgrayman:
lol, your just saying that arent you? I was thinking about throwing that one in the scraps cause, I dont know what i was thinking when I wrote it, I'm glad you like it at least. Thanks.

--
Our greatest glory consist not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall.

I'm an addict for dramatics, I confuse the two for love.
:icontears-for-christ:
wow i love it. this is one of my faves.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:iconevilgrayman:
Thank you so much for the comment and the fave, whats funny though is that I find this one too be, embarassing. lol

--
Our greatest glory consist not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall.

I'm an addict for dramatics, I confuse the two for love.
:icontears-for-christ:
yeah... i know how that goes. lol thanks. and ur welcome.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight

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